Articles | Volume 6, issue 4
https://doi.org/10.5194/wcd-6-1683-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
The potential of GNSS radio occultation data for the analysis of the tropical width: a comparison with reanalyses
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- Final revised paper (published on 04 Dec 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3745', Anonymous Referee #1, 01 Sep 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Annika Reiter, 03 Nov 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-3745', Chi Ao, 12 Oct 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Annika Reiter, 03 Nov 2025
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AR by Annika Reiter on behalf of the Authors (03 Nov 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (11 Nov 2025) by Thomas Birner
AR by Annika Reiter on behalf of the Authors (17 Nov 2025)
The authors leverage 15 years of GNSS radio occultation (RO) temperature profile data to examine the width of the tropics and its change over time. They compare the resulting diagnoses to longer records from several state-of-the-art reanalyses. Ultimately, it is demonstrated that RO data provide useful characterizations that broadly agree with the reanalysis diagnoses, especially upper troposphere lower stratosphere metrics where RO data are complete and most reliable. While I find the study to be mostly well-constructed and detailed, there are a few aspects that require a bit more clarification which I outline below.
General Comments
There are many instances of “on the NH” or “on the SH” that should all be revised to “in the NH” or “in the SH”.
Specific Comments
Line 7: the opening sentence of the abstract is a too strong of a statement. As the authors acknowledge later, this result is contingent upon the metric used. The language should be softened here.
Line 29: delete unnecessary period after “include”
Line 32: “systems” should be “system”
Lines 71-75: these sentences are entirely unnecessary
Line 85: a brief discussion of the wind retrieval is warranted here. It is later stated that the wind isn’t a simple geostrophic retrieval, so what is it?
Lines 92-93: is a ±2 day Gaussian time-weighting approach appropriate? This could be better justified/explained.
Line 250: “extend” should be “extent”
Line 257: “then” should be “than”
Line 311-312: there are a few studies that have revealed this narrowing via tropopause break metrics – Martin et al. 2020, https://doi.org/10.1175/JCLI-D-19-0629.1; Zou et al. 2023, https://doi.org/10.3389/feart.2023.1177502; Turhal et al. 2024, https://doi.org/10.5194/acp-24-13653-2024
Line 330: “this a globally” should be “this globally”
Line 335: delete unnecessary comma after “(Nimac et al., 2025a)”